My Rap/poem...must Read!

Discussion in 'Off Topic Discussion' started by Civic96, Jan 26, 2004.

  1. Civic96

    Civic96 Full Member

    Thank you for stopping by!LOL
    Anyways, this was something I was writing last night and finished this morning. Its a rap/poem I wrote for a girl b/c I promised her I would. We were talking about finding the right person....blah blah blah...enjoy...tell me what u think....and yes it is deep. This is a mid draft...not final


    I stare inside the mirror of my soul, to see my life flashING before my eyes; the devil hides skin deep so when I dream I sleep with sharpened knives.
    With a double-edged sword the world is feeding me; misdirected youth fighting mortality, doing drugs in hopes of finding me.
    I am no god, but my presence leaves an aura even craved by Wes Craven; The Crow screams death in a wasteland known as human's haven.
    I reaLIZED that these rhymes are just another way to spill my soul; for every word I spit I felt the cold; for when I speak the truth be told; unfold this paper but to hold it not to smoke it, write with blood and then refold it.
    My message bottles twists and puzzles men find dark and twisted, fore sighting sight behind truths that go unlisted.
    I take my anger to a world with magic mushrooms and 6-dollar syrup bottles, engulfed with hopes of finding worlds that’s only dreamt by toddlers.
    The Pigs have flown 6 laps around the shattered building of my soul, 6 judges wait to sentence me 6 nights before my soles grow mold.
    I sprouted roots too deep to dig with shovels made by men who made me, I am not deaf but only blind to three mice that betrayed me.
    I kneel before you, and I hope that this is all a dream; My roots untangle and then my hands turn clean; a light of hope shines bright above the halo on my head; the mirror lied the truth be told that I am dead.
    The fight for me draws blood between those good and evil, above is god below is man for he has made the devil. 2000 years have passed since I have passed beyond the pastures passed by few; but now I wake and all I smell is dew.
    I look around and then my eyes grow cold with hatred for what I am; a creature blessed by god and hated by my own men.
    I walk the fields in hopes of finding food and shelter from the ones that sent me from it, I see a shadow and proceed to walk toward it.
    She stands before me and I could see the coldness in her eyes; she grabs me tight and we begin to cry.
    I stare inside the mirror of my soul, to see my life flashING before my eyes; I see myself with her and we begin to reaLIZE: There is no more of what we used to know, no war, no hate, no blood in snow;
    The fight we fought has brought us two together, for God spared us because inside our bottles he found blood letters.
    And there I stood and held her firmly to my chest; I knelt before her and finally knew that I was blessed.
    We looked around and then we saw what needed to be done; For I was Adam, she was Eve but together we were one. The world felt empty , and I knew all men besides us were no more, but when I looked, I saw a light beyond heavens door.
    The light grew brighter as we walked toward it, and when we blinked we saw ourselves in it.
    She was the one, I felt it in my heart; but as quick as we had met we began to fall apart.
    I woke and felt cold sweat drippING down side my face; and I looked around in hopes of finding what I embraced.
    And to this day I walk the streets in search of my dear love; she is gods gift sent to me from above.